hi
here is my last long ,
i would like to listen your opinions .
thanks
http://www7.zippyshare.com/v/72892863/file.html
Trance in trouble-emre doganModerators: Christophe, Mark
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Trance in trouble-emre doganhi ,here is latest version of the track ,it includes litle mastering
http://www11.zippyshare.com/v/61700086/file.html :
Trance in trouble-emre doganNice one.
@ 00:58 I would make the synth pad line bigger. I was expecting a nice synth line coming now. But it stayed very thin. Then at 01:10 the kling thningy started very loudly. I would intruduce it. tiny then louder. But not as loud as it is at the moment. Layered synth line with nice atmo before (just enhance the one at 00:58) then introduce the kling thing. But it's a cool track. Have to go ahead and listen to the rest. the instrument which is present at 4:17 sounds pretty cheap. After that 04:25, very nice again. You might want to use the Flux Stereo Tool (Flux STTool) at the master bus to enhance the overall stereo image of the track. Or just send the final, enhanced track to a mastering engineer. I also would cut the upper end of the EQ band. There's a constant crisp overtone (which comes from the hihats and/or another instrument (Example: 08:50). I would fix that as after a couple of minutes you thing you might get a headache. It's too crisp. At the end you can hear the hihats without too much other stuff. Then you realize that they could sound a bit more expensive. The bassline 02:11 is very good! Really fits. Nice Track man! Like it. Last edited by DaZoid on Sun Jul 26, 2009 11:41 am, edited 1 time in total.
Trance in trouble-emre doganactually i just used firts time izotope ozone 4 ,and dont know anytthing about the mastering
i am just trying learn it my self,maybe i have to send my tracks straightly to mastering engineer(even i dont how ) but thanks for you .your comments are really important for me , :
Trance in trouble-emre doganTo be honest I only listened to the stream, it has a progressive trance feel to it, but I think the drums are to busy, to many BDrums scattered all over the place. I f I was dancing to this , It may be confusing a bit? I love the bit a 4:35 , this could have come a bit earlier, this is your hook. Good effort 7/10
Last edited by DEE on Mon Jul 27, 2009 7:23 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Trance in trouble-emre dogandear dee
yes,its true that the song has too many bd drums,i will try to cut it ,but i am ifraid of the cuting it so much,,,however i must try:-) :
Trance in trouble-emre dogan
well, well, well... that's why one should never be lazy when starting a new track and make it work from the very beginning :biglol: Otherwise it ends in tears...
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